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carol
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0 posted 2003-02-05 11:30 PM


Daddy even though your parents i stayed with untill i was grown
I never for one minute not know that your love for me was strong

you always made me feel like to you i was such a treasure
when i would see you come up the road it was such a pleasure

After i grew up we would ride down a country road listening to a song
We would sing to the music even if we had the words wrong

We would take long rides hunting a special fishing hole
We would find a place and catch a fish it would feel so good to our soul

It gave me so much pleasure to have our special talks
Then down a little dirt trail we would take a long walk

Daddy i always knew that way down deep in your heart
That in your life i was a very big part

Even if you couldnt always be with me i knew you cared
Daddy i will always cherish the lovely times we shared

I enjoyed every minute together we had
I love and miss you so very much dad


© Copyright 2003 Rita C Burkett - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2003-02-05 11:31 PM


This is so sweet. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

carol
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2 posted 2003-02-06 12:03 PM


the-loner-23,thanks i just wished he was still here.
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-06 01:18 AM


Carol, this is so heartfelt. I'm really glad
that you wrote it. Maybe it will help your
pain some. I hope so.

Hugs to you from me...
Ethel

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-06 02:52 AM


I saw my father today drive through the parking lot at WalMart...we haven't spoken in years...and are not meant to ever again, I guess.
Ericc
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5 posted 2003-02-06 10:14 AM


This has such a sweet feel to it.
Thank you.
Eric

carol
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6 posted 2003-02-06 10:41 PM


Passing shadows ,I dont know what your reason is for not speaking to your dad or why your dad hasnt spoke to you but i know it must really hurt my dad passed away nearly 9 years ago& it is still so hard for me to deal with.But when he was here i would not be able to stand it if he didnt speak to me, it makes me cry to know you have been hurt so bad.maybe things can work out before it is too late Love Rita
carol
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7 posted 2003-02-06 10:43 PM


Ericc, Thanks glad you liked i wish i could enjoy those times again
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