Open Poetry #24 |
Daddys Love |
carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Daddy even though your parents i stayed with untill i was grown I never for one minute not know that your love for me was strong you always made me feel like to you i was such a treasure when i would see you come up the road it was such a pleasure After i grew up we would ride down a country road listening to a song We would sing to the music even if we had the words wrong We would take long rides hunting a special fishing hole We would find a place and catch a fish it would feel so good to our soul It gave me so much pleasure to have our special talks Then down a little dirt trail we would take a long walk Daddy i always knew that way down deep in your heart That in your life i was a very big part Even if you couldnt always be with me i knew you cared Daddy i will always cherish the lovely times we shared I enjoyed every minute together we had I love and miss you so very much dad |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet. I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
the-loner-23,thanks i just wished he was still here. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Carol, this is so heartfelt. I'm really glad that you wrote it. Maybe it will help your pain some. I hope so. Hugs to you from me... Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I saw my father today drive through the parking lot at WalMart...we haven't spoken in years...and are not meant to ever again, I guess. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This has such a sweet feel to it. Thank you. Eric |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Passing shadows ,I dont know what your reason is for not speaking to your dad or why your dad hasnt spoke to you but i know it must really hurt my dad passed away nearly 9 years ago& it is still so hard for me to deal with.But when he was here i would not be able to stand it if he didnt speak to me, it makes me cry to know you have been hurt so bad.maybe things can work out before it is too late Love Rita |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc, Thanks glad you liked i wish i could enjoy those times again |
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