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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-06 02:04 PM



Dropping lines
of devilsih madness
with skillful
shattered pen

Interpeting midnight
cyrptic visions
upside down
sleep writing

In a state of dreaming
the dark muses
do pen
abstract phrase
Which I only sign

Millions of images
flood my mind
in rewind
stuck
warped
I begin to decipher

Ah..then pen touches
paper
and so I begin to breathe..

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-06 02:12 PM


Wow...this is poetry at its finest.
Thanks.
Eric

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2 posted 2003-02-06 02:18 PM


"Millions of images
flood my mind
in rewind
stuck
warped
I begin to decipher

Ah..then pen touches
paper
and so I begin to breathe.."


Much enjoyed the read...
especially the above lines
as I can relate to them.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-02-06 02:48 PM


thank you!
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4 posted 2003-02-06 02:59 PM


ohhhhhh, have you ever scurried in the dark to find pen and paper as you repeat the lines over and over in your head so as not to forget?  

Nicely done!  

Susan C.

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-02-06 03:19 PM


as a matter of fact I have...by the way did you ever get my email
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6 posted 2003-02-06 03:23 PM


Why no I didn't when did you send it?
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