Open Poetry #24 |
To Your Love I Am A Slave | > |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * A room full of candles Satin sheets on the bed The color of our love nest Is a passionate shade of red Rose oil fills our senses As your touch ignites my fire I feel love take effect With a deep and burning desire Every love song I hear Reminds me of you As I look into your eyes A deep sapphire blue How sensual are your hands As I respond to your touch Such feelings are exquisite That it's almost too much Temperatures are rising Beads of sweat move down my chest Your hands move from my shoulders On soft mounds they now rest Love courses through my body Throughout each and every vein As my passion reaches its peak I start calling out your name Your love fills me completely To your love I am a slave As the night turns into morning More of your love I will crave I am in motion |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I think Al Pacino said it best in Scent of a Woman... "Hoooowah!" Passionate to say the least |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Very Nice! I truly enjoyed this. Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, such passion fills your words, you always write of love and romance so gorgeously, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - very warm and touching write, I like it, I like the romance of it very much... BC |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Beautiful. Just plain beautiful "it was cute, it was like he was shy and didn't want to make it too obvious" |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully sensuous and lush, Sue... I enjoyed it very much ~ loving chipmunk hugs sue... Lyra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Sue, another one for my library.... Thank you so much for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you are so romantic...maybe you should be my teacher...I need some lessons. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Wonderful passionate romance Sue - loved it - Paul |
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