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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-05 05:58 PM


hard hit
remnants of a new day
but we never expected the breaking of the waves
we've got to move on
tomorrows past and today has come
into a new igsistence of 24 hours
as u walk along the street
be sure to stop and smell the flowers
forever changed
your time has past
struggling to hold on
to the last memories we've traded for new
we've got to move on
but we already knew that tomorrows past
and theres no looking back
in your 24 hours
as u walk along the street
dont have time to smell the flowers
the revolutions of Earth are insignificant
when loved ones are present
in the days of our demise
we shall repent all the our memories represent
the sins of man
all part of gods devine plan
to save the world from ourselves
and in our lives
we shall accomplish
less then what we put on ourselves
to preform arrests
of our hopes and dreams
and we should know by now nothing is as it seems
the sun is dawning
our Earth belonging
to every man woman and child
who put themselves thru uneccessary hell


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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-05 06:41 PM


Wow...I am impressed with your creativity.
Eric

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