Open Poetry #24 |
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To Dance With You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now ![]() |
“TO DANCE WITH YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Night thoughts are soft as moonbeams, shadows embrace each other this night, to look at you into eyes enchanting, wanting to dance with you in candlelight… Music plays softly in rhythmic mood, perhaps a guitar strums to mesmerize, would you dance are whispered words, your charming smile returns butterflies… Tender fingers placed upon your waist, hips move swaying gently to entwine, lips are soft with passions caress, closer is your touch, melting to combine… ~~~~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
You've made me want to dance! I'm gonna go turn on some music and dance but... none of the music will be as soft and melodic as you've written this. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, love to dance in the moonlight.. Wonderfully romantic write Bill. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOY YOUR READ ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...let's dance... ![]() always you write so lovely ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh BC how I wish I had the energy to dance other than in my dreams. You know I always love your poems. Hugs, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous dance and I know your love would never resist to take your hand like this! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
How I love the dance... Beautiful. Thank you... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, what good thoughts you made come to my mind...... My Love and me at the beach, dancing in the moonlight to soft romantic music... after we've eaten a delicious dinner by candlelight........... ![]() [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 09:28 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--At times, there is nothing more romantic than a slow dance. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill Such a beautiful picture you have painted from your palette of words....exquisite! Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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