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Gathering Particles - for Duncan
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Gathering Particles - for Duncan |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Gathering Particles A floating nucleus of word, singularly alone, as a left shoe on a rack of many for sale, it’s twin to be found only if a purchase is incumbent… so I floated, gathering particles of thought like dust motes, seen only (only) if the soul is seeking… but I left the day, quit its storehouse, my thoughts vacantly bereft, for I had only gathered particles, not worthy of blackest ink of the weightiest pen. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
snippets of real life reverie and poetry remembering love |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
good one. most of my musings seem to fit in this category... but they still often produce a smile, if only to me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so I floated, gathering particles of thought like dust motes, seen only (only) if the soul is seeking =========================== Dear Decca...only you could pen of dust motes and make them so lovely... the forums seem to be flowing with inspires found in our fellow poets pen.. and isnt that the true gift of this place.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deca, may I just echo JM? And add...this is wonderful.. and you write beautifully on any topic. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you certainly wrote well of gathering particles which.. you say.. unworthy of ink? not when you write them, no, not when you write them. Enjoyed! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-05-2003 04:57 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Duncan, this is so very touching, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well, it is all like pointellism and it takes so long to focus nevertheless so exhausting to try! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hmmm...sure don't remember writing this Noah, but thanks! lol Deca---I'll be back!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'A floating nucleus of word, singularly alone, as a left shoe on a rack of many for sale, it’s twin to be found only if a purchase is incumbent… so I floated, gathering particles of thought like dust motes, seen only (only) if the soul is seeking…' I'd like to think I understand these verses. I don't know what you intended, but they read to me kind of the way I write. I liked this alot, read it quite a few times trying to figure it out...lol. |
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