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Chaff and Prim
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chaff and Prim Those would find the Eden glen. Must take account of where they’ve been. Must recognize the path of whim. And peel away the chaff and prim. Must lighten all their weight of must. Must fill their minds with only trust. Stand upon a mountain high. And face their face into the sky. It is a gardens fantasy. Upon a road of agony It is a garden of the blind. Or should I say a state of mind. Do you believe the blind can see? Than I would say you have the key. Insert it in the rhyme of lock And face your time that shows the clock. There is a prima factor goal Forgiveness is its heart and soul. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Eden is locked behind a gate Which most have forgot of late Opened with faith and trust But the hinges squeak with rust Gloom |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, I always enjoy reading your poems. You are one of the best. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'It is a gardens fantasy. Upon a road of agony It is a garden of the blind. Or should I say a state of mind.' I love the image of this verse Sy. 'A garden of the blind'. Perfect. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Sometimes I find the answers better then the poems. Thank you. SmartChick Thank you sweet,  Duncan I like your comment, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do you believe the blind can see? Than I would say you have the key. Insert it in the rhyme of lock And face your time that shows the clock. There is a prima factor goal Forgiveness is its heart and soul.==================================== Your soul poetry should be published in braille so that the blind could touch the vision of your wisdom rhymes. I touch me screen and trace your rhyme scheme dreams    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, What can I say, you are my blind spot? WWRS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Would those who opened Eden's soul learn from travesties' own black coal? Would there they sketch the dream of men? and once again green Eden's glen? You're kicking muses today, Sy... but that's your magic! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, I believe the blind can see, perhaps more better than those who can see but have sinned so much further! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerfully insightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh Sy! Wonderful read you left for moi this morning. Oh! it wasn't just for me? But of course I knew that. Love this...into my Sy folder it goes. Now...tea? ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you are my magic sunshine, Noah, Always enjoy your replies. Nancy, Tea for two and me for you, thank you dear. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Enjoyed. The last line speaks volumes. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Thank you sweet, |
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