Open Poetry #24 |
Dreams |
poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
Where do dreams hide? Maybe by you bedside. Somewhere maybe you could see. Or in the sky flying free. Or far away in a foreign land. Or under your feet beneath the sand. Dreams are everywhere, you see. They are in you and me. Dreams are like clouds in the sky, For you can reach them if you try. And they will never leave a day, For dreams unfilled will always stay. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
How true... dreams are everywhere, and they are never truly hiding- it is only that we aren't looking to find them! A wonderful write... thank you!! |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
I hope that all your dreams come true, wherever they are and whatever they are, for dreams are to be created into reallity. Nicely writin piece, i really enjoyed it! |
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*Star* Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 32Iowa |
A dream is an awesome thing, and so is your poem |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this. Good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
poohbear19, this is lovely and so right |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Andrea, this is a really pretty poem. I think we should never lose our dreams. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Elie Junior Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 14New York, USA |
Dreams unfilled will always stay...I agree. Beautiful poem |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
reaching the clouds was, once, just a dream too I like this! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
This is wonderful and a pleasure to read. I have also posted "Dreams" on this page. Perhaps you may wish to check it out. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...enjoyed...James |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
this poem is adorable! :P and it really made me smile |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
Thank you all, and dreams are good for everyone. andrea |
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