Open Poetry #24 |
My Heart |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“MY HEART” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Sometimes when I’m close to you my heart beats so fast that I wonder if it will stay together… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as you truly are a romantic who is destined to make your love swoon always! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
this is very good, thank you so much for sharing it with everyone. Keep on writing for poetry is what everyone trys to write but only a select few can actually make sense of it. Andrea |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very good - you have said just enough to complete the picture nicely! bravo! warm regards, Roniece |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now that is what I call warm fuzzies!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is cute. I love it... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this m'friend is sweet and cute I love it! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, Romantic and sweet. For those times when 'it' doesn't work out, must be where the term 'heart-breaking comes from... Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's what my old man said to me...he said they were gonna have to carry him out on a stretcher...lol |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nothing like the pounding of ones heart to remind us that love is indeed alive and well. Nice write BC~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--I know this feeling..it's wonderful and frightening. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this one Bill...I have felt like this *s hugsss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling!! Makes ya kinda scared...yet it's wonderful. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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