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Open Poetry #24

A Lesson From The Rosebud

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-04 09:39 AM

The rosebud
Longs for a single
Unknown moment -
An instant crushed with
Tenderness.

The rosebud
Knows only of its yearning,
Breathing fully in this tenderness
That threatens to destroy.

And the rosebud
Can only surrender to
This longing -
Can only surrender and die
Within the passing hand
Of love,
Can only surrender...and nothing more.

And this is enough
To become a Rose.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-04 09:42 AM

(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, and I know with your giving heart the rose will waken in bloom to a love that is special and true! (big hugggsssssss) This is a true gem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

2 posted 2003-02-04 02:38 PM

There is that moment
when I place the
sharp edge
to the
stem

amen

and the scent
swells

*Star*
Junior Member

since 2003-02-03

Posts 32
Iowa

3 posted 2003-02-04 02:51 PM

This was very beautiful

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-04 02:56 PM

Lovely...perfectly lovely.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2003-02-04 04:17 PM

Beautifully written...I can smell that fragrance in my mind..

believe in what your heart feels...

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

6 posted 2003-02-04 09:25 PM

Beautiful... such a divine, sweet, fragrant spiritual lesson...

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

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