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Solid Shadows |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Solid Shadows no black and white to cover me shades of grey is all I see the solid shadows of doubt turns trust to something inside out "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It's hard to see through the grey, well done! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
One time after I had passed out, for maybe twnety seconds (but what seemed hours) I could only see outlines and shades of things. It was all black and white. But the black outline was a whole lot better than a grey blur I like this. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
It's the unknown of what we see that we doubt .... excellent contrast, so much said in so little words. Well done! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful told. Eric |
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