Open Poetry #24 |
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Pain |
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*Star* Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 32Iowa |
underneath that superficial smile there is anguish a devastated soul falls and no one cares down beneath the swirling rage lies a hopeless scared girl exposed, alone with nothing crushed by hate torn by angst she cries with no one to wipe away her tears |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) It is so very sad but true, sweet friend, so many children and less fortunate are not gien the compassion and help they need and we must reach out and console these victims to the bitter neglect! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to them all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Star, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ouch ![]() and I think, the story of too many. But That its what you're feeling and going through, I'm so sorry, you expressed it well here. Keep writing, it helps. And welcome to the Blue pages!! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Welcome to Passions~ Very sad indeed. So unhappy. No idea if you are writing about yourself, but I do know this: I am capable of envisioning the wounded, confused, abused little, tiny girl in me and ~I~ hug her, and ~I~ am the best, most loving parent she's ever had and ~it~ works more often than not. Embracing ourselves so important when dealing with those who are evil or cruel or mean. I ask myself what kind of child I was and I cannot help but love her...hope you can to... Hugs to you, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You'll find as I have star that there are many here who will help wipe them away |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() Anytime you want to cry or unload some poetic sorrow, there will be a reader in here. There will also be many who will be greedily awaiting your smiles. ![]() Hope you enjoy the variety. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very expressive write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice and honest of your feeling at this moment, |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Touching write - hope the pain is not yours, if it is PRAYERS. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
I relate to your pain Star, sometimes......it really does feel as if there is no one there to care and it is very hard not to give up. Hoping all works out well for you soon.......and you can find a little shining star in your life |
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