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Mistletoe Angel
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1-800-CUPID
(Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/3/02

If you would like to be loved
By your true love you have been longing for
Then just pay your hopes and joys to Him above
And soon you will find the love of your dreams and so much more

Never again will you feel lonely, never again will you feel lost
Thanks to the magic of the cupids, piercing our hearts with loves light
The cupids shall attract you to your soulmate at no cost
Just pray and accept and believe, and love will come to you in jo time

But wait, there's more, your true love will be with you for a lifetime
All you have to do is call now, and be true to yourself, it is 100% guaranteed
How much do you pay for an eternal gift so divine?
Don't answer, because it is absolutely free

Now soon, your life will be complete when you least expect it
Pay nothing but love and light to 1-800-CUPID, and love will find your way
Sorry, no CODS, that's 1-800-CUPID
Don't delay, love today!


















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-04-2003 09:43 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-03 08:27 PM


Oh Noah!!  This is so beautiful as are the pics and animations.
Wonderful work sidekick...
You're going to make all us gals here at PiP swoon!!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-02-03 09:32 PM


Noah, oh, my, this is just like a beautiful store bought card. What a beautiful piece of heartfelt work. You are one romantic young man. hugs to you for this, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-02-03 10:11 PM


Noah - I'm calling now, thank you for the poem and the phone number...

BC

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4 posted 2003-02-03 11:40 PM


aww noah this is absolutely adorable!  *sniff*  

boo hoo i don't have a valentine!

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5 posted 2003-02-03 11:47 PM


Noah, this is so pretty. Here you are making all these wonderful graphics and I can't even put a little old picture with my poem.
Oh, well, I'm glad that you know how to do all this. I'm gonna learn one day....just don't know when...lol
.
.
In the meantime, I'll enjoy all this wonderful work and pictures all you other talented people put on here......

Ethel

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6 posted 2003-02-04 12:01 PM


Your choice of pictures/graphics is the product of an inspired muse. And the poem? a most romantic take on the *where, oh where is love?* theme.

The words and images match the tone, the pictures graphics complement the style and it all adds up to an equisite reading experience.

I'm 78 years of age , yet it sure made the romantic part of my soul do a rock and roll waltz! (I am already the father of a 6yo son. Think we'll try for a daughter next time by using the formula so elegantly expressed in this piece.)

Patrick Talty

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7 posted 2003-02-04 12:04 PM


psst...typo 'noithing'


You'll be making Hallmark jealous with this one.

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8 posted 2003-02-04 12:08 PM


I really like this

Cold hands means a warm heart

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9 posted 2003-02-04 03:06 AM


beautiful! though I had a hard time reading the font...(ouchy to my eyes)
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10 posted 2003-02-04 03:29 AM


Noah...A wonderful read my friend. Better that candy any day...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-02-04 03:54 AM


You should sell this card in the stores for Valentines Day...James
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12 posted 2003-02-04 06:17 AM


Thank you dear sweet Noah ,wonderful romantic grahics and words ,  probaly the only Valentine I will recieve
Hope

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13 posted 2003-02-04 07:05 AM


liked this red  and all,
hearts and flowers and all that love exuding from the page, real nice,
just a phonecall away, cute.

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14 posted 2003-02-04 08:05 AM


I loved the religious aspect you placed on Valentine's Day.  Many people feel (especially on this day) that because they aren't loved by a 'significant other', that they aren't worth love at all.  This proves that we do have a Father above who loves us unconditionally.  All we have to do is call Him.

Nice job Noah :-)

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