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If It Could Be
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If It Could Be |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IF IT COULD BE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Deep in the south is my passion, summer nights under southern skies, warm breezes blow quietly, bringing me closer to your sighs… Take me tenderly into your arms, close as you will, not to let go, through the night I would with you, knowing later of the afterglow… Warm breezes caress upon my face, she rides the wind, coming closer to me, I would give all that I desire from within, if only tomorrow, if it could be... ~~~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are so romantic..you should bottle the stuff and sell it *s hugs M *hey I got another good idea for you..why not take your love poems and roll them up and place them in small perfume bottles... "Romance in a Bottle" ahhh I am so creative Bill. [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-03-2003 07:19 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Boy what I would give to feel some warm ocean breezes about now Bill. Lovely romantic write. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC I can feel the heat sizzle on the breeze with every word. It gets pretty hot here in the south, but your words are making it hotter. Nicely done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, I know this feeling ever so much, I just want to be the giver, the epiphany to soe girls heart and sometimes I just feel so hopeless! (sad sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice sendoff, billy, time for bed now............... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, you do these so good!!!!!Do you write poetry to your love? Just wondering. If you do, she has to love it. I love it when my Love writes poetry to me.  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now I like this one, very much! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot  |
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