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Open Poetry #24

Frozen Dreams

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-02-03 03:59 PM

I’m vulnerable
As if a child
Playing on the edge

And I’m scared
As if a child
Left alone

I’m hiding
As if a child
Not wanting to be found

I’m crying
As if a child
Too weak to be strong

I’m lost
As if a child
Don’t know the way home

And I thought this was home
I thought I was safe

I didn’t know
That you could
Make my dreams turn
So cold.

small insignificant useless me

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-03 04:23 PM

Powerful emotions...with equaly powerful words.
Eric

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-03 04:32 PM

I love the expression of emotion. Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-02-04 11:20 PM

Bitter are the dreams that leave us feeling so cold..........I know~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-02-05 03:16 AM

we're all a bit like a child, sometimes its just brought out more. Children are so precious, so vulnerable... but we all are, in ways. Our minds are still ununderstanding... But this made me think you can make it through with Faith, like a child.

A thinker and, I hope things go ok for you.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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