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zenny
Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-02-03 02:30 PM


A missing...
shallowness in depths
of my heart
A lack of
something...someone
us apart

A yearning...
reunion of two souls
once divided
A hope
you share this
ache with me

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-02-03 04:11 PM


I really liked this!  

Susan C.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-03 04:31 PM


This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2003-02-03 06:09 PM


Very filling words ...
   ... to a very deep place.
  
  Excellent!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-02-03 07:06 PM


if he does, he will come
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