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Cocaine Girl
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Cocaine Girl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Cocaine Girl How could she not notice as she smoked it that she would feel a potent thrill. And on each successive occasion it felt like taking a happy pill. But each time she came down it would hurt hard to hit the ground. And as her years passed away she found that there was a price to pay. She lost her self respect and her joy would leave her too. She lost her family and then there was the children she never knew. She lost her youth before it was all through and along the way her health became a casualty too. Now you can do whatever you choose with your life and I know that you will but don't be like cocaine girl and give it all away for a thrill. JamesLee February01 2003 |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very good words of wisdom here!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good message James...sigh |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) I pity all the sad souls who waste their bodies away on drugs, I am zero-tolerant and believe it is like quarter suicide! (sad sigh) this is powerfully said, sweet friend, my thoughts are with all the victims, we all love you so much! You have such a beautriful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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*Star* Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 32Iowa |
 Awesome poem with a great message |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
a very true message. I've known first hand too many who give their life up for that. And then the friends... the family sits beside wishing they could help. But you've gotta make your own choices. knowing it effects everyone. Like this. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
This is so sad and yet so true. keep on writing. you go boy! Andrea  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank each one of you for the nice responses...James |
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