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Peter J Marcroft
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since 2003-02-02
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York, England

0 posted 2003-02-02 05:12 PM


Insanity

By Peter J Marcroft


I lie alone, counting the soft white bricks of my cell,
Watching all areas, I keep hold of my power,
Contrary to belief, inside here is not a hell,
More like a room, where forbidden thoughts flower.

What I was is nothing more than a distant past,
Before my mind played tricks and I saw them all,
Sanity fades, like life it cannot last,
So I readied myself, to answer their call.

Then fame found me, and I was adored by men in white,
How was I to know their interest was shallow?
Just as I began to think that my star shone bright,
I got abandoned here, like a field left fallow.

Yet I am safe here, while the world sells its soul
To greedy corporations, and surrender to conformity,
I smile as I rot away, down in my hole,
While the world out there, is reduced to lunacy.

[This message has been edited by Peter J Marcroft (02-02-2003 06:04 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-02 05:17 PM




(big hugggsssssss) That is the problem with the world today, we fear change so much because we look back on the history behind us and fear all hat will happen is anarchy when even now is much more depressing than ever! (sad sigh) I would rather be in that prison too than become a conformist of extreme measures, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Peter J Marcroft
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since 2003-02-02
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York, England
2 posted 2003-02-02 05:19 PM


Why thanks again, I have some more but I shall not post them here yet, obey the rules and more importantly, not look like I am trying to make myself look like a person who craves attention from the board
jade dragoness
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3 posted 2003-02-02 06:02 PM


How was I too know their interest was shallow?

Other than the wrong 'too' typo, I'd say you have a perfectly wonderful in-depth look at the sanest side of insanity. LOL, does that make any sense?
I enjoyed this write.

Peter J Marcroft
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4 posted 2003-02-02 06:04 PM


Thanks for clearing that up for me, for absolutely months I have been unsure as to whether that was the correct one, and I studied english language and literature!
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5 posted 2003-02-02 06:41 PM


You took and intense topic, and flowed it like a river. Nice write.
Welcome to Passions. ThisDiamond

Peter J Marcroft
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6 posted 2003-02-02 06:43 PM


Thanks for the welcome and I am glad you enjoyed the poem
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