Open Poetry #24 |
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You Came And Showed Me Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * My life was void of love Until you came and showed me how I left my troubles far behind me And started living here and now My road seemed long and winding But you guided me from the start As you came and took up residence Within the confines of my heart There were no colors in my rainbow And my skies were dull and grey But you filled my life with color On the day you came my way My flowers soon had more fragrance And the clouds had a silver lining My days seemed so much brighter And like a diamond, I was shining You filled my heart with love Soon my heartaches were no more How I beamed when in your presence With the smile that I now wore I felt capable of anything For your love lifted me high above You filled my life with happiness When you came and showed me love I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - what a great feeling it is that you write about. I love it... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well as I have lost my love and now I'm semi-black and white now but know if I find love again I will feel rainbows grace evermore! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, you write of love so beautifully. I especially love this piece. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Beautiful imagery in your words- you have painted a lovely dream. May we all gain more color, more sweetness, more fragrance in our lives- or rather, let us become more aware of all of this that is already there. How beautiful... Thank you... |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~ Love is so beautiful in many ways and you write of it so gracefully. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, as I was reading your poem, I was thinking that you have to really be in love to write of it so beautifully. I really enjoy reading your love poems. The happy ones remind me of me and my Love. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I need someone like that! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful! *S* I like this a lot, Sue! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Another lovely poem and how wonderful that you can feel this way! Hope you always will! Betty Lou Hebert |
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