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paladin
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0 posted 2003-01-31 09:15 PM


Forever
Bathed by the water
Baptism

paladin

....a knight without armor

© Copyright 2003 Robert E. Jackson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-31 09:50 PM



Spent waves, rushing back
To the sea...drags pebbles, sand,
From under my feet.

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2 posted 2003-02-01 04:15 AM


awesome!
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3 posted 2003-02-01 08:25 AM


Well said....

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4 posted 2003-02-01 06:54 PM




(sigh) Oh Robert, I love this sanctifying feeling, sweet friend, this is wonderful, may this feeling of cleanliness always fill you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-01 06:57 PM


Homey, I love it......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-02-01 09:22 PM


Small and great! ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-02-02 07:10 AM


Smile...

Neeraja

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8 posted 2003-02-03 07:36 PM



paladin~
I'm liking this...nicely said.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2003-02-04 08:16 PM


this is a good haiku but I was always told that Haikus were 5, 7, 5 (syllables), and yours in 3, 5, 3. Oh well.

Andrea

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10 posted 2003-02-04 09:24 PM


I love haikus!!  Beautiful... thank you!!
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11 posted 2003-02-04 10:03 PM


So simple, so clear, so good.

Thanks for it.

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