Open Poetry #24 |
Pebbles - haiku |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Forever Bathed by the water Baptism paladin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Spent waves, rushing back To the sea...drags pebbles, sand, From under my feet. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well said.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Robert, I love this sanctifying feeling, sweet friend, this is wonderful, may this feeling of cleanliness always fill you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Homey, I love it...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Small and great! ThisDiamond |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Smile... Neeraja |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
paladin~ I'm liking this...nicely said. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
this is a good haiku but I was always told that Haikus were 5, 7, 5 (syllables), and yours in 3, 5, 3. Oh well. Andrea |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I love haikus!! Beautiful... thank you!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
So simple, so clear, so good. Thanks for it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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