Open Poetry #24 |
To The Begin |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Where forth the night in cadence call With silent rushes of wind and sound Softness of wave lap or misty rainfall To make one think of hallowed ground Beyond the sight of darkness hold Images move in beyond the pale In cadenced dance both timid and bold Til the sounds of night concert in sail Teaching the lesson of now to then Or from the past hidden in shadowed world Bringing forth the time of past time when Gusted in mists, curling and swirled Lessons be learned with new ones taught For past to future is only a leap To lift the thoughts to ones so sought From rise of sun to nights slow creep For as the night will promise the dawn With sunwashed days to light the within To bring new worlds in silent spawn From old to new in gentle begin |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Logan...such lovely words...peaceful feeling..thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) And it will always be thus! (sigh) This is wonderfully wise, sweet friend, take the nights word for it and tell the dawn all about it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: I hear the voices, begin, again as volumes fill the book of time, and be it known if but to you, the passages are still in rhyme... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-31-2003 03:53 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I just knew you had stayed... I could smell the smoke from the campfire. So pleased to see you posting again... This is beautiful!! ~Soft Smiles & Gentle hugs~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
M'lo? smile. You are aloe... medicinal honey. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Possibly the best of your work I've read yet, Logan, hon. Sad, but with hope in the end. Hope you are well! Cor |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
anything that talks about cadence is worth the read! I like this.. its soothing. Thank you Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
flows well, very calm and serene |
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deepblue Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 17 |
gave me shivers hon, very well put. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is a beautiful poem. I love the first stanza, especially. Enjoyed greatly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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