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Tears Can Wash Away Hurt..........2 senryus
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Tears Can Wash Away Hurt..........2 senryus |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Though we rather not Tears can be very cleansing Washing away hurt When hurt feelings go Peace brings good feelings to heart Tears of joy then flow |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
seems a familiar themse here... much enjoyed Ethel, And very true. Tears of joy are so overwhelmingly great! err better go catch the school bus! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tears are cathartic in any form, aren't they?... Well said, Ethel...  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GG, Yeah, I couldn't get the thoughts out of my mind, so I wrote it. Yeah, I've got to go, too. I'm going to visit my parents today. See you later.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Yes, it is a familiar theme. Alyssa's being the inspiration, a compliment to her, smiling here and of "tears", volumes can be written. You wrote of them well. Liked this...but, must say the only time I've weep tears of joy was when Christ sat with me for three days....that's a kind of weeping, indescribable, a chapter of my life I've been trying decide how to write without divulging too much of self, or, acually others in my life at the time, not that I don't do that often, but, there is a reason for it. Thinking about a piece of prose and this tears poem reminded me of wanting to write of Tears of Joy....and that experience...Well, at least I have the title started..smiling and enjoy your sensitivity and big heart... Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-31-2003 10:32 AM).] |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Sweet and simple... Some of those short poems that drive straight to the heart are my favorites. Keep up the good work, Ethel. ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
yeah, sweet and simple |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, one thing that really saddens me is how so many men are ashamed and are taught when they are young never to cry! And I believe that it is important to show tears so then others can help you grow and become stronger, and I cry a lot but not ashamed of it! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, true |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I hope you never have a need for tears to wash away hurt--but alas, I suppose experiencing pain and heartache are all part of the learning experience here on Earth--I just wish a gentle soul such as yours could by-pass those aspects of the learning process! Poignant write... Warm hugs, Linda |
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