Open Poetry #24 |
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Remembering When.........For Larry and Martie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside ![]() |
My heart gently weeps for the loss of your love and the wee babe in your arms that you once held so dear. Through the eyes of a child and the passing of years that make up your memories laid to rest in your words. For all of your days remembering when inspires a tear that stings in the wind. From the love that you've sown and the gladness you've known and the strength of your will in the face of despair. Touches me deeply bringing hope ever after a comforting solace that reads like a prayer. Embraced by the angels on the wings of a dove shines from the heavens in the light of his love. (I was compelled to write since I can't seem to recover tonight) Hugs~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-31-2003 01:57 AM).] |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lori~ Your kind heart and gentle words will touch their hearts as they have touched mine. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, your compassion and love is going to touch both their hearts when they read this. It is so full of emotion and it really touched me. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have more than read Martie, and Larry; you understood, too... Thank you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful thoughts Lori. *s M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, their love and strength come shining through, giving lessons to us all. Glad you got your muse back. This poem is sensitive, warm, loving and humble. I enjoy it a great deal. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori--Thank you for your caring heart. This poem is beautiful and gave me a smile. ![]() |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
touching. and any poem that's directed to someone is always commendable. this is even more special though, because it was heartfelt. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet Lori, this made me cry as I truly believe this with all my heart that Ginger and Michelle and all the other children that parents in the world have lost are always guiding their mommys and daddys with love and they will alwas be with them! (wipes tears) This made me cry too, sweet friend, you have an angelic heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my.... ![]() this is so touching.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lori...this is so beautiful and so full of compassion. You have a wonderful and giving soul. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Seldom is friendship felt deeper than through life's sorrows. How tender your caring from such a far distance. Yet close to my heart I hold these words dear. Thank you. ![]() (And isn't it interesting my daughter was Ginger Michelle.) If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If you could read your words through my eyes you would know how much you've moved me. Thank you for reading and giving me the opportunity to reach you somehow. Therein lies the love that you've sewn (not sown.........aaaaaaack) I'll leave it alone, because when it's all said and done the thought remains the same~ Peace~ |
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