navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » I'm Angela! But Who Is Angela?
Open Poetry #24
Post A Reply Post New Topic I'm Angela! But Who Is Angela? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
fathomless
Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 11
SC, USA

0 posted 2003-01-30 10:35 PM



I came to the womb of another starless night of apprehension
Clouds so dense above darkness cast out around me
Fleeing the winged demons who would descend upon me
and draw me beneath hope
Apperations of what surrounds me drawing out of space and shape
and harmony
Why such chaos in my prescence
So discreet of life and death and relevance
A sober reality
One more dawn beautiful but empty, washes over my skin
But brings me nothing
Another day to be lost
Just a different day to confront the reflection staring back at me
A look so distant, so alien to me
Not all eyes are empty, Not even mine
Not yet
Still searching the barren wasteland,
Whos only echo is silence
I can't seem to cease the invasion of my shadows
In the flesh locked sea of longing
Mute eyes comb the two deminsional me
For a short way home
Home to Angela, home to warmth
But all that looks back
is so sad, such a sad eyed girl

© Copyright 2003 Angela Nash - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
1 posted 2003-01-31 09:13 AM




Hard to think that with this talented ability to reflect that those eyes will forever be sad, or that they even are empty right now.... like the depth of this. A place I have felt. Enjoyed.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-01-31 09:17 AM


fathomless
The play is the thing, enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-01-31 01:46 PM


this cuts
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » I'm Angela! But Who Is Angela?

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary