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Sunset (january imagery)
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Sunset (january imagery) |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Sunset Sweet sunset so often described, Poet’s pallet empty and canvas covered Yet majesty daily reigns down. Sand in toes escaping cool water’s kiss, Face the west, eyes towards flames quest, SEE the sun, attention to one. Sun spot flare, focus narrow there, Stationary sentinel set, Voila, la lumiére arrêtte! Laissez faire la terre tourné. Heavenly traveler sweeps you away from the Sun. Rush of blood acceleration back, The sun does not set, the earth turns away… Like the Poet from his eternal Flame. -majnu |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are a poet who faces the sun and his eternal flame--for your words light up the page! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Its hard to understand why this has got lost in the shuffle when it rings out so beautifully! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
thanks to you all for the compliments. -majnu |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A unique and thoroughly enjoyable sunset POV. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Beautiful imagery... sweet and beautiful. Thank you for this delicate dance of the soul. Thank you... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I enjoyed this greatly! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no comprendo el frances, pero me gusto mucho su poema just love watching the sun go down, makes the day come together for me |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Looks like a success, eh?...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Majnu, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a beautiful sunglare of magic from your pen that lighted my heart reading! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Majnu, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Purple_Muse New Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 1 |
I can feel that your poem was full of rushing thoughts. Perhaps you could not turn away from the gaze you laid upon the sun. I think that you knew that it would burn you, but you told the tale like a lover ripped from their soul... Quite nice. XOXO, Purple_Muse |
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