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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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Grey overcame the sky The earth was replenished With tears from the sky Colors are hushed As the clouds chase the sun But playing in the rain Can be oh so much fun |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul--It has been a long time since it has rained here....I think I would go out and jump around in it if the sky opened. A delightful poem! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Delightful read! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"colors are hushed"....like that line as well as this short, fun poem. Yes, it is such fun to play in the rain. Enjoyed this. Made me smile. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, I love the rain so much and I don't care if my long hair gets all messy, I just love to skip out in it! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Paul! Much enjoyed the read..and I love the rain as well. Did I mention I'm glad you're posting again?  ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes. Depends on the point of view. sweet read, Paul. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Thanks everyone for your responses - Paul |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very nicely done! |
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