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Night Pour
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Night Pour |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Night Pour I am tenderly seduced lulled by patters of the night I feel darkness caress my skin as days last lace drops in gentle fall and touches the earth "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Wow, this fit and flowed so well! Very nice  Dennis |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovely visage - I enjoyed... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I actually feel physically relieved watching the sun set--it's as if I'd been holding my breath all day. You captured that nicely. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I never watch the sun fall that much, but I just love to watch the sun rise always! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a nice sight, huh? |
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