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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-29 11:50 PM


Night Pour

I am
tenderly seduced
lulled by
patters of
the night
I feel
darkness caress
my skin
as days
last lace
drops in
gentle fall
and touches
the earth

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
dhicks03
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1 posted 2003-01-30 01:03 AM


Wow, this fit and flowed so well!
Very nice


Dennis

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2 posted 2003-01-30 07:15 AM


Lovely visage - I enjoyed...

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-01-30 01:09 PM


I actually feel physically relieved watching the sun set--it's as if I'd been holding my breath all day. You captured that nicely.
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4 posted 2003-01-31 08:36 PM




(sigh) I never watch the sun fall that much, but I just love to watch the sun rise always! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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displaced
5 posted 2003-02-01 03:34 AM


it's a nice sight, huh?
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