S O S (Repost Open Poetry #12)

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S O S (Repost Open Poetry #12)

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

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0 posted 2003-01-29 11:34 PM

S O S

In a vast ocean full of distress
Out in the horizon a loud S O S

A lonely sailboat
Hopelessly afloat

A broken mast
No line to cast

With all things askew
Then right out of the blue

In the knick of time
A rescue, a line

A guiding light
Shine so bright

A lonely tugboat
To keep you afloat

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-01-29 11:37 PM

It's hard to keep afloat when the person you love is gone. Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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2 posted 2003-01-30 02:15 AM

good write! I can relate

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