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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-01-29 11:08 PM


My heart aches
It yearns to have love back
It wants to know
If love will ever come back

This pain is so hard
Will it ever go away
Will love ever come back
My hearts way

Right now my heart
Pains to be loved again
And is in darkness
Until love comes back to me.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-01-29 11:32 PM


Well now, it took me twelve months to recover. Courage...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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2 posted 2003-01-30 01:28 AM


It never left. I had to help my Dad with something. I love you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-30 01:56 AM


give it time...you'll do fine
Brad Majors
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Georgia
4 posted 2003-01-31 12:40 PM


You express your heartache quite well.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-01-31 12:52 PM


Julie, usually I reply to a poem first and then read those that others have written. Having done the latter this time, I read ThunderMage's reply first, and it appears all is well! That's a relief!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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