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Wading |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wading Come beyond the water's edge. Take my hand and wade deeper. Let the waves push against us. Bodies touching beneath the surface. Passions build with each wave. Clinging tightly in the sparkling surf. We ride the swell of sea. And embrace as the tide rolls in.. With soft moonlight from above We celebrate our everlasting love. believe in what your heart feels... |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
A very beautiful and enjoyable write. Thank you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Scorpio, A perfect way to celebrate! Like this a great deal. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a softly beautiful and loving poem. I enjoyed this very much for my morning. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oooooooh enjoyed this sensual ride upon the waves! lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent...what an image of love here. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Scorpio, with the water and the moonlight that I love so much. Do you mind if I send this one to Gary? Thank you for sharing with us....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Come beyond the water's edge. Take my hand and wade deeper." -------------------------------------------- Scorpio..These opening lines alone are so very caring and loving. It gives a feeling of security, immediately setting the tone for the rest of the write. Of course you know I loved this so very much...  Yes, I would take your hand and wade deeper. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice beach scene...good write. I enjoyed it. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This Diamond...thank you for reading and commenting...I appreciate your support.. I'm honoured that you would want to sent this to Gary, Ethel...very flattered.. Enchantress...please take my hand and we'll play in the surf.. Thank you Passing Shadows...glad you saw the images.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sigheyes...thank you for your read and comments.. regards2you...glad you enjoyed it.. Gentle Spirit...wonderful that this helped start your day.. Thank you, Gemma...two people in the waves can be quite sensual.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"With soft moonlight from above We celebrate our everlasting love." (sigh) This is sooooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggssssssss) Your golden heart shines with true loves purity and I know your love will always be blessed to have you dear! I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a sweet view of the ocean, right now, im more of a rider on the storm, but its making me think, thank you [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-20-2002 07:40 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this brought back the feel of the ocean... I do miss that, now and then... an experience everyone should have at least once. Thank you, Scorpio! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Noah...I appreciate your warm comments...thank you... Inkedgoddess....storms..surf...they all work...thanks for you read.. Thank you, Karilea....glad I was able to stir up some memories for you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed |
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