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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-29 06:53 PM

sleep blesses
this winter malaise
with a blanket
of dreams,
sweet salvation
from the relentless grip
of industrial grey,
and piercing chill,
freeing me tonight
wrapped only
in the onxy sky,
i can dream now,
the day finally still,
and find you,
in this only place,
where i can openly
love you

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-29-2003 07:13 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-01-29 07:44 PM

inkedgoddess - sweet are the words from your pen...

BC

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-01-29 07:50 PM

Very soft and lovely, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-29 08:16 PM

Michele, this is a very sweet one. I like it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-01-29 08:42 PM

Michele,

Sweet dreams, you.... Enjoyed the creativity of this....

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-01-29 09:07 PM

Ethereal! Very beautifully done... a dream
of and in itself...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-01-29 09:15 PM

To dream like that is sweet~~

indeed~

Nicely penned Michele~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-01-29 09:25 PM

Wow...I really liked the way you wrote this one. Very sultry...vivid. Applause!!
ThisDiamond

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-30 02:30 AM

wow...I'm not knowing what to say, this is beautiful!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-01-30 06:53 AM

thanks for the nice replies,
i think winter gets to be too much right about now

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2003-01-30 05:47 PM

You are very right when you say winter gets to you right about now. Thats why all the flights are filled with people going to florida. But cheer up, the good news is winter is winding down with 6 more weeks to go. Bad new is.....6 more weeks of winter and I aint even a groundhog. But lets take 2 weeks at a time.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-01-30 06:24 PM

You described a dreary winter's day so well--but it sounds like your dreams are sweet and cozy!

May your days be as warm as your dreams!

Love, Light & Laughter
EA

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