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Two Worlds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Two Worlds There are two worlds I know for sure. One is real, the other appeal. I do my best with what I earn. And leave the rest for what I yearn. There is a balance of the two. What we do, the other a coup They are the elements of our rite. One by day and two by night There is no conflict that I know. Two gardens and two gardens grow. They work together hand and hand. And live with us our hours sand. It is the rhythm of your rhyme. That helps you with your given time. So do not war each separate creed. They are one store of two we need. And till you reach the very end Be happy with the life you wend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So do not war each separate creed. They are one store of two we need. ==================================== Could one couplet be any cooler? Could it hold more wisdom, truth or humanity? Me thinks ya got more in your pinkie and pen than most ever comprehend  You are me poet of way cool Stinkylove. Randys flying round the room saying thats my Sy-guy ... just look at him fly high. *ww*    Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"One is real - the other appeal..." Thus the ying and yang of our existance... More morning food for thought... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I will I will! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Silver gleams in clouds today because of Sy, and his way of say...  g'Morning Sy-guy! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed the rhythm of your rhyme that sets our day in pip...enjoyed,Sy.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM So Randy's flying blowing smoke To much excitment and he'll croak. He may wind up with a cough But he knows where he's better off. Good morning love nice to see you up and about. WWRS :swueeze: Nan Yes, ying and yang comes in different packages. Hugs wayoutwalt GOOG, GOOD Sunshine Your to sweet to eat. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You arrived while I was answering, thank you my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy oh Sy! Do you write these in your sleep? How do you do this each and every day? Way cool write m'friend. *Kettle is on* ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Morning hugs and green tea, what could be better. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-29-2003 09:39 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I love what you show us of both your "worlds". You do have such a way with words, and I love it.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Lovely comment, |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
the rhythm of your rhyme touched my heart!!! Neeraja |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am always happy where I am...in life...until the next day comes and then that is my happy day *s nice Sy M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Everyone keeps beating me to what I wanted to say this AM, but I'll still repeat it... "it's the rhythm of your rhyme"....plays over and over....I like that... enjoyed...thanking you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja And the time of your time touches mine. Maureen, Good responce, thank you. Pat, It is my place to thank you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as it is the second world that makes anything possible and dreams come alive in any circumstance! (big huggssssssss) Keep playing hop-skotch between these worlds, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I liked this: "It is the rhythm of your rhyme. That helps you with your given time. So do not war each separate creed. They are one store of two we need." I do so need both of mine.. Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, I find hop-scotch a good game. Susan, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seymour, How do you do this. I love your poetry. You are a master of rhythm. SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold That is a simply gold comment. LOL thank you |
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