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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Transition Transition is a local train With sorted obstacles and pain. Some can be a joyous ride Perhaps the alter with a bride Transition can be a thought An idea that you have bought Or perhaps a change of way That brings more sunshine to your day. Some are brought about by sight It’s called the seeing of the light Some are dogmas left behind A weight of yesterday in mind Some are just simple concessions Brought about by a confession. And some are just in growing up The precious of a buttercup But I believe transitions bend To suit the time until the end. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ahhhh such a wise talented mr tabin you are. as always, enjoyed very much. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed as always But the stanza: Some are just simple concessions Brought about by a confession. And some are just in growing up The precious of a buttercup Just doesn’t sit with me as well as the rest Probably because of the youthful image of the Buttercup, and those childish dandelions (which just became weeds as I grew up) I might rewrite it Some are just simple concessions Brought about by a confession. And some are just in the growing The precious views of new knowing. Call it not critique But an different view inspired Gloom |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, I love the way your poetry flows along as I'm reading it. It's simply beautiful beyond words.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Enjoyed your write Seymour. Thank you. [This message has been edited by sigheyes (12-19-2002 08:59 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the morning insightful read Sy. Off to get more tea. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Life is change...we are all willows in the wind. Beautiful write. ThisDiamond |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very thoughtful write this morning Sey. Well done, enjoyed.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - I think I have taken this train more than once or twice. But each ride was a lesson on this earth school. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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lukeyd Junior Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 11 |
Interesting concept of life being the ride of a train. Very unique. I think that we can all identify with some aspect of this idea. I enjoyed the read and I thought the piece was well written. Very good. Peace. ----Lukey-D---- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemma, Such a nice reply. Professor, Understand your different view, thanks for the read and reply. garysgirl You are a sweet heart. sigheyes Thanks for the read and comment. Enchantress, And morning hugs to you. ThisDiamond Thanks for the read and reply. Gentle Spirit Thank you dear. Chris We all have taken this train. LOL thank you. lukeyd Thank you for the very good. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, transitions bend, blowing in the wind of time, in the preciousness of the youthful buttercup and the commonness of the dandelion...... Gaining beauty and humility, we always changing, becoming all we are meant to be. Warmest regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And then you have those of us who resist change... even when we know it's for good? *G* I liked this very much, Seymour... and wish your transitions to be smooth ones. *S* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Balladeer has told me about these things...male menopause etc....but you've explained it so much better than he......I had a transition radio once? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could write about fighting transitions, I guess...this reminds me of one I wrote called Cocoons...nicely done Seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Always enjoy your thoughtful replies. suthern You are a sweet heart. Toe, Ya know I had one of those radio's Sunshine  passing shadows Thanks for the nicely done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And transitions are such beautiful things and they are certainly not horizontal, for changes have their special freedom of expression! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the read and bump. |
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