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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-28 04:44 PM


Forever More……Lizzy

My Dearest Lord Bryon,
yes, it is me again, Liz
when I caress the pages
you held
(I whisper)
my heart flows from
the ink of his
I rush to write you
a few words of my own
but the silence is broken
by a loud beating tone
you leave me so breathless
I almost feel faint
to you my emotions and words
can find no restraint
I am a lady and should not speak
in this course
but when I read you
breath is labored and forced
you speak in tones
so tender and sweet
I rush to read you
beginning to end complete
I finish this letter
and send it quickly to you
Lord Bryon, Lord Byron
I do adore you too


Forever more, Lizzy

*repost as my affair with Lord Bryon continues*

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2003-01-28 05:59 PM


cool
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-01-28 06:00 PM


This is very good poetry

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-29 02:58 AM


incredible! where have you been hiding this?....*clicking quick to go get the other poem now*
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-01-29 08:32 AM


Lord Byron...must be a lucky stiff..
or does that make you lucky.. ( chuckling)

very nicely done.... I enjoyed

Nan
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5 posted 2003-01-29 08:44 AM


I was going to say what Cpat said.. well sort of...
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