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Freedom Lost
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Freedom Lost |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Where is the freedom that used to be Lost in time where not to see Cast away as chip that twirls Til tossed to beach on ocean curls To lay waiting upon the sand Til picked up by questing hand Where full of dreams in magic lay Taking the senses beyond the day Horizons beckon with siren’s call Freeing the mind from block of wall Whispering a word more felt than heard As imagined beat from winged hummingbird A smile does creep over treasured found Winds take aloft on silent sound To free the soul out of apathy Bringing home the freedom that used to be |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
long time no see... nice to read you again. Hope you can stick around and delight us some more with your verses. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, Logan... you've been gone much too long... |
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Poetic Bard Member
since 2003-01-22
Posts 84Canada, BC |
Quite the poem, I really like it. I'll have to look for more of your pieces. I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yea i miss freedom. sucks growing up and all. now, kindergarten... THAT was freedom! heh heh. well what can i say.. life sucks.. grin and bear it.. it wont last much longer.. have a nice day |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You hav been missed... Please stay a while longer by the fire... Wonderful write... ~Soft smiles and gentle hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Logan, I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope that you will stay around more so that I an see more of your work....  Ethel....garysgirl |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Cpat Hair, I appreciate your kindness, Sir, in your words and thoughts. All of you have been missed as well...gentle smile Well, Sissie, I never really left, you see, for all of you are always carried with me..very gentle smile Poetic Bard, Thank you for your kind words and for reading..gentle smile Ahh, well, EagleScorpion, Thank you for your read and comments. However, when you reach my age, it is easier to just smile and go on with what we have and be glad we have it...gentle smile Ahhh, Leighgirl, of course you liked it, it had the word magic in it. Have missed you also...very gentle smile to you Why, thank you, Ethel, most kind of you in your read and words..gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lookie what I found...sweet keeper... where have you been BOYEEEEEEEEEE  As always your rhymes a divine and are held in the sands of time. (dont stay away so long poet sir)  Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Logan, so nice to read your work again. This is very thoughtful, and as always, much enjoyed Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I believe in freeing my soul...it may take awhile but I am always working on it. *s nice to read you again. M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--It has been a long time and your words have been greatly missed. As always you write with a thoughtful heart.  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Where is it, indeed... Nice to see your words again, Logan...  |
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jade dragoness Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76 |
I truly enjoyed this read, especially: "Where full of dreams in magic lay Taking the senses beyond the day" It let my mind drift upon the waves. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you're back |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Apathy is right, sir! We are, I fear, about to find out just what it is to lose more of our freedom. Good to see you here again! Hope all is well. Cor peace is patriotic |
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