Passionate Feelings Stirring (# 10 Twenty or Less)

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-12-19 02:45 AM

Holding each other
closely,
we snuggle in front
of the fire
with feelings stirring
lovingly within us,
passionately

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2002-12-19 02:58 AM

very good, and what i hope for one day

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-19 03:03 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and I wish for this eternal flame to always sing and dance deep in your golden heart happily! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

christian
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since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

3 posted 2002-12-19 04:03 AM

this is a little better. i'm not going to
attack its format, cause for all i know it
could be some structured to fit a style.
you gave your words somewhat of an honest
feel this time [not saying with your other
poems, that they werent honest] .. but w/
this one, i can almost feel the emotions
seeping thru the words. i enjoyed the write

-chris.

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

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PA/USA

4 posted 2002-12-19 06:00 AM

Love elegantly puts a caress to my smiles. Thank you.

etoodog

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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5 posted 2002-12-19 06:50 AM

This is warm and romantic.

I miss the fire. Hmm I'll just have to wait for the winter.

enjoyed

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (12-19-2002 06:51 AM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-12-19 07:13 AM

love the sparks of this one.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18

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7 posted 2002-12-19 07:43 AM

Hmmmmm, now this is my kinda scene, thanks for painting it~!

*S*

Laney
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since 2002-12-18

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Illinois

8 posted 2002-12-19 08:08 AM

Awww...makes me wanna grab my boyfriend and cuddle by the fire! Good write!

--Alana

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-12-19 08:59 AM

Dixie,
thank you for reading and replying. I know in my heart that someone as loving and giving as you will have this kind of love one day. (and very soon, I hope)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-12-19 09:00 AM

Noah... always knowing just the right words to say. Thank you so much, friend.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-12-19 09:09 AM

Christian,
I'm really glad to see you here. I do appreciate your reading my poem and for your reply.

I'm also glad that you could feel the emotion in it. I like for readers to feel something from my poems.

By the way, Chris, I'm sorry that I was so sassy in my response to your replies yesterday. After all, everyone is entitled to their own opinions. I'm usually not that way. I guess it was that I'm just not used to people being so outspoken. I have a friend who speaks her mind that way. One thing about it, a person always knows where they stand with her....

Anyway, I really do appreciate your reading and replying to me. Thank you, Christian

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-12-19 09:12 AM

Robert, I'm glad that love "puts a carress to your smile:.
Thanks for reading and replying.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2002-12-19 09:14 AM

Dark Angel, there isn't that much cold weather here. Is there much winter there?
Thanks for reading and replying.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

stifler
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since 2002-12-18

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ontario, canada

14 posted 2002-12-19 09:14 AM

very nice poem garysgirl, i enjoyed it tremensly.

stif

garysgirl

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15 posted 2002-12-19 09:15 AM

Kethry, I'm glad that you felt the "sparks"...

Thanks for reading and replying.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2002-12-19 09:17 AM

Tone Of Voice,
I'm glad that you saw the picture and that you liked it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2002-12-19 09:18 AM

Hey Laney, go grab him and get by the fire....

Thanks for reading and replying.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

18 posted 2002-12-19 09:20 AM

Stifler, thank you for your reply. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Auguste

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Posts 3953
By the sea

19 posted 2002-12-19 06:22 PM

A very pretty scene you created, Ethel.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2002-12-19 06:46 PM

Enjoyed...James

garysgirl

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21 posted 2002-12-19 06:57 PM

Michael, thank you very much. I really appreciate your kind words.

James, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-19-2002 06:57 PM).]

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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right...there

22 posted 2002-12-19 07:04 PM

Put another log on the fire...could be a long night...well done Ethel!!

believe in what your heart feels...

regards2you
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California

23 posted 2002-12-19 07:30 PM

Ethel,

Sometimes, simple works very well.
Your presented a nice, warm cozy scene I don't know who cannot imagine it and feel good about it. (I know there is a bear skin rug there, too) smiling,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

24 posted 2002-12-19 07:35 PM

Thanks Scorpio, we will...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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Posts 19237
Florida, USA

25 posted 2002-12-19 07:37 PM

Uh-huh...thank you, Pat.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

26 posted 2002-12-19 09:20 PM

Ethel...your heart is showing...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

27 posted 2002-12-19 09:24 PM

Beautiful Ethel...warm nights in front of the fire...mmmm.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

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28 posted 2002-12-19 09:42 PM

with feelings stirring
lovingly within us,
passionately

So tightly phrased...As I've said before, you two are a very lucky couple to be so close. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

29 posted 2002-12-19 10:17 PM

Lovingly written, and a tribute to your relationship. It is always a pleasure to read how you feel. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Salty
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since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

30 posted 2002-12-19 10:26 PM

I think someone is ...to blame...for all these warm writes of yours lately. Lucky you!!!

Nice Stuff Ethel

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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