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vandana
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0 posted 2003-01-26 11:54 AM


What If
What If there wIll be no tomorrow
If Time would take us
To heaven
And see light
In our eyes
And Lord would bring us new day
Again
Don't worry
About rain
If tomorrow never comes
We can hold on
To time
If It gives us some time
To think over It
About what may comes
If tomorrow never comes
Hold on
To your heart
And think about the rain
Would pour down on us
If tomorrow never comes
We can push away tears away
And fill our hearts
With love
If tomorrow never comes
Hold on....

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-26-2003 11:55 AM).]

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jade dragoness
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1 posted 2003-01-26 12:20 PM


Another reason to embrace a carpe diem attitude, and live for today?
enjoyable read  

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-26 12:37 PM


yes! live for the moment! make the most of today! great piece! you've really done well with this vandana
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-01-26 12:39 PM


We have nothing but this moment...
Nicely done. ThisDiamond

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-01-26 12:39 PM


vandana, beautiful write. For me, it is why I relish each day and thank God for helping me stay in his light.

Huggles, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-01-26 12:40 PM


Vandan, I really like this poem. You have put lots of truth in it. I enjoyed reading it......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Pezz1
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6 posted 2003-01-26 02:06 PM


Thank you for the read no one may know what the future may bring so living to enjoy the day may be one of the most important lessons we learn
Martie
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7 posted 2003-01-26 02:44 PM



Vandana---So true...hold on to the day...make the most of each moment.  Thank you.

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2003-01-26 03:09 PM


Thanks for for sharing these profound feelings, Vandana....
These are thoughts which I must live with every single day of my life
~many chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-01-26 03:13 PM


If tomorrow never comes
We can hold on
To time


what a wonderful thought..I  may be inspired by  these words, thank you
hugs
M

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