Open Poetry #24 |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Too scarred and broken, My sword is too dull. I’m simply too weak To reach for my goal. I fight pretty well In the times that I try, But for now I am broken And wish I could cry. The pains overflowing My mind and heart. My body is filled, And it’s falling apart. But tears will not come, And I still try to fight. I’m wanting to give up, All I know that is right. Hid it for too long, And now it won’t come. Set ready for the battle, Still dry-eyed, And numb. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hey, you're not alone! Never give up! |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
As shadows says DO NOT give up Often times tears can relieve a person, so don't hold them back, let the river flow Many hugs, kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
and if you can't cry - write. *HuGS Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a place we've all been, GG - Gratefully, there's light beyond the dark... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
GG Enjoyed the write very much. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dixie, Almost more saddening to know I'm not alone. Other people have to face it too! Thanks for the reply Kelly, you;re right, tears can relieve, thats why I want them so much!! ..but thanks much and still hanging on. Kethry, amennn! Writing is great! thanks much. Nan, good to know there's always light, isn't it? I'm thinking its not even meyond the dark.. just eyes are closed in hopes of tears.. it dispells darkness y'know thank you! Seymoure Sir, Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you muchly for responding. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, So heartfelt. ~Surrender~, the hardest lesson to learn, yet, the most important. Hugs and love to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Pat, Yes, it definitely is one of the hardest.. and so, so important. But, this too shall pass.... to bring along another battle. Thank you, Love and hugs to you Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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