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Consolation |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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I might have had a favorite bear to cuddle needed to refer to some comfort..to huddle away from the chill bite of winter winds hidden somewhere where there was traquility. That a parakeet's company meant so much it succumbed to desease..there was a hush some tears were shed.. hearts spang a leak..bled consoled with another to take its place the corner of the living room..offered space. The need to write to a special friend and say 'stick around to the very end.' consolation broke when distance divided reality spoke up when flight took hold experience came by the book..grew bold. might have had a favorite game around the house and read beyond curfew..silent as a mouse removed from the chill bite of winter winds buried beneath the covers on a dark lonely night. grew to know how to console another's sorrow reconcile the past and see a brighter tomorrow developed a knack of seeing myself from the outside put some peace between me and trivial circumstances this material world...is all but a brief instance so why nuture heart pains life has its strains wiser to be gentler on myself. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-26-2003 01:54 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Martin--I did enjoy this look into the child of you....and your thinking adult as well. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Such wonder and wisdom, a blessing. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
guess that's the way of the world the tender moments of youth many years ago...and their contribtion to what strengths we have today...thanks for sharing Martie |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
It is a wonder that the child has come through until today..thank you for your kind thoughts, Kellie [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-26-2003 02:00 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The need to write to a special friend and say 'stick around to the very end.' consolation broke when distance divided reality spoke up when flight took hold experience came by the book..grew bold. I like that and the way you ended this. Your writing is unique as your words are wise, they give pause to the poet who writes himself. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Blues, it's really a challenge to follow what I write..thanks for reading |
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