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Doldrums
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Doldrums |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Funny what difference the sunhine can make With the rain comes a day dark and gloomy On waking, my attitude just seems to take A negative stance all-consuming... The rain on the glass pours straight down in a sheet Enveloping all in it's flowing It's destiny met and it's task is complete Discontent is the seed it is sowing... My energy's gone, and instead in it's wake The doldrums have spawned and they're creeping I now close my eyes for a short well-earned break Today is a good day for sleeping! A truly happy person is one who can enjoy the scenery on a detour! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (01-24-2003 06:23 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Defiently like this one a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Loner!! Yep.....it is a good day for sleeping! Thank you...this one just sort of washed itself onto the screen...guess it must be the rain!! My muse is a shape-shifter at times!!!! Lol!! A truly happy person is one who |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Sunny  It's not freezing there, is it? I think you said how cold it was when you replied to a poem of mine, but I can't remember how cold you said. If it is, ya'll are going to have some icicles. Oh, I like your poem, as always...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sunnyone, I believe Van Morrison is right when he sung "Momma said there'd be days like this!" but know the sun is always bound to shine the next day! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunnyone--It is not raining here, but I can relate anyway...been in that doldrums place all day. Could it be raining inside me? Hope the sunny comes back to you soon! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
It's also a day for cuddling up with a good book.  Hugs, Sunny, love seeing you here. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Some time when I go sailing I am besieged with a doldrum.I just lie back and enjoy the play of the sea and the sky.Soon the wind picks up,my sails billow and I'm off again. paladin |
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