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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-24 10:16 AM





surrender
to the void,
drifting
slowly
towards
weightlessness,
emptiness,
self/nonself,
awaiting
my return,
finding
lost wings
again,
beginnings,
on the
edge of
endings,
three steps
forward,
two steps
back,
do I dare
take it all,
fading,
falling,
flying,
rejoicing,
hanging on,
sky falling
into the
sea,
sea rising
meeting sky,
no separtion
no fear,
hear the call
everything/nothing
awaits,
shedding
layers,
exposing
who i
was,
but
please
take my hand,
and
meet me there,
i am still
afraid







[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-24-2003 06:44 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-01-24 10:44 AM


it's like straddling a line of no return...

M

regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-01-24 11:19 AM




Yes, and that is just about the point where faith steps in, and a deeper belief in something other than self....at least that is how it was for me in the what seems like hundred of free falls I did.....

enjoyed this a lot...

Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-01-24 11:45 AM


faith , i hang onto, god, i dont know, if hes there, he comes from a greater place than himself, too..im sort of a wandering taoist
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-01-24 01:47 PM


I know about wings
bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
5 posted 2003-01-25 07:27 AM


3 steps forward 2 steps back means you are getting ahead slowly but surely. When you find your courage you will do the right thing for you. Look for the hand thats extend and grasp it. Take the hand and enclose it in yours. Walk hand in hand if even for a little while. And smile that bright smile even if it hides the pain, the disappointments. Have a piece of chocolate and get in the mood.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-01-25 12:12 PM


hold on tight...
the night is long

but eventually,
the morning light
breaks through

and another chance
is offered you


garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
7 posted 2003-01-25 12:39 PM


Michele, I know this feeling very well. Even with all the love that my Love and I have between us, I still get so afraid sometimes that something unforeseen may happen. But, I'm so glad that both of us are taking the chance that we can make it down this road of life together.
I know how hard it is when you've taken a chance and it falls through again, even though you've put everything you have into the relationship.
Good luck, sweet Lady.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-25-2003 12:40 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-01-25 06:36 PM


Conflicting emotions, don't you hate it?

Hey but you manage to spill them nicely..

What's up with that ink you're using,
I gotta get me some!  

Good write Michele~


ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
9 posted 2003-01-25 07:03 PM


This had the feeling of falling, and I was swept within it...
Found the rip cord to the parachute...sometimes even wings are not enough... All prayers to you my friend.
ThisDiamond

vandana
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10 posted 2003-01-25 07:03 PM


enjoyed
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