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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-01-24 10:05 AM


Why is it that you get mad
when you decide to stop by
and I'm nowhere to be found?
Did you think I was gonna cry?

You act as though your hurt
when you see that I'm having fun.
Have you finally realized
the full extent of what you have done?

I'm not saying that I don't love you
or that I just don't care
but right at this very minute
this is more than I can bare.

It hurts to not be with you
while spending this time apart...
Hey, I'm really sorry baby,
right now, I'm not willing to share my heart......

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-01-24 10:26 AM



Reba always nails it, doesn't she...
so do you.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2003-01-24 10:34 AM


My sunshiney friend, you do know that I love you yes?  Thank you for all that you have given me....so much more than you shall ever know......
Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-01-24 01:45 PM


YES!!  You hit it right on with this one Donna!
You hang tough there girlie..
Just know there are many of us out here who really care.
Be well...smile..be happy.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-24 01:51 PM


it's good sometimes that they squirm, and better when you get to see it

seriously, I know what it feels like aside from the revenge; it hurts, and I am with you, as many others are, you are not alone.

Poetic Bard
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5 posted 2003-01-24 01:59 PM


Wonderful, I'll have to look for more of your work.  It carries alot w/ it, I'm impressed.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end?  More beneath?  Or something more?

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6 posted 2003-01-24 03:12 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, this is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I couldn't blame you for feeling this way and I only hope he has the heart to listen soon and sympathize with your needs! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2003-01-24 08:57 PM


a girls gotta do what a girls gotta do...
and so does a moth

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8 posted 2003-01-24 10:17 PM


Sometimes we need to step aside, not share our hearts until we're able to understand them better, or when they feel especially fragile.  An excellent write, Donna.  This is a keeper, my friend.    Hugs

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-01-24 10:19 PM


Way to go, Donna...make him wonder where and with whom you're having fun.......

Don't want to be mean, but there's no sense in people hurting other people like you've been hurt!!!!  

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