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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-01-24 02:14 AM


The Girl from Honolulu

Soft and sensual.
The girl from
Honolulu is essential.
And when she kisses
me I want more.
I love the way she holds me.
I love the way she unfolds me.
And when we turn out the lights
late at night I could kiss her
all through the night.
Honestly I could.
Really I would
love to make
this girl mine.
She's so fine.
Wish she was mine.
If only the girl from
Honolulu could be mine.

JamesLee
January24
2003

There I go listening
to the Girl from Ipanema
again.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-24 02:40 AM


nice song...could hear it softly in my head
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2 posted 2003-01-24 04:09 PM




(sigh) Oh James, I just love this, I can imagine this becoming a song with a Jack Johnson-esque acoustic backyard relaxing rhythm to it, yay, your poems are always a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LadySofia
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3 posted 2003-01-27 06:29 PM


Lovely words, dear to the heart. I hope you get her too...
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-01-27 09:04 PM


Thank you passing shadow, Noah and Lady Sofia for the nice responses...I hope I get her too...James
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