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My Life.... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Hangin on, Trying to let go of my past. If I stop holding, won't I fall, Why not let my old self last? I guess that what makes us different, from the trees, They get wiser As they grow tall, For a while, you know everything, then you lose it all..... I don't have time, to watch the stars, now everything's so cold, I remeber, when I was a child, I was afraind of growing old guess what...... I still am. I't not easy, To be me, sometimes I'm invisible, When I'm not, I can't be free, I'm not saying, Your life's a sunny ray, but I used to be afraid... afraid of.... It doesn't matter anyway But guess what..... Never be normal! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Oi. That's intimidating... Forgive my own personal interpretation. My head isn't on straight. A very wonderfully written poem, Wind.  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
when I was a child I was afraid of growing older....I still am, So am I Wind, yet, I'm not~! What a deep thinker you are, your emotions I feel~! nicely done~! *S* ATov |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Life has a way of being filled with human complications. Very nicely penned. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, I too used to be scared as I suffered as a child and wanted to just remain a kid so I can cherish living as a happy boy, but now I am not afraid no more as I know ahead things will be much more fruitful! (sigh) God Bless You, swet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm 33, and I know this now better than ever, but it took me awhile...you are a wise one for being so young |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah, what's unsaid. |
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