Open Poetry #24 |
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Poison |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Twist the truth and make our fairytale love into a bitter nightmare of hate And I, will allow what I thought was real to echo through my mind, and in time, slowly die Lie to yourself, and everyone else And maybe someday, Perhaps in a bad way, You'll have to face, In a different place ...the truth and you will sweat, with regret ...the verdict Poison the well, with water from hell don't hesitate to decimate heavens rain from above kill our love as well with pain it won't matter now seems easy somehow for you to gently sleep in peace or that I will lie awake and pray that this will someday go away and still to my utter dismay it's true ...I love you Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks All Rights Reserved By Author 5-21-01 |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Unrequited love...the sad side of love, Dennis. Well written angst. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Too bad there's so much pulling between love and hate these days..you're getting aware of some of the hard truths of life though ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this hurts...the ending really touches... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dennis, Liked this a great deal. Can apply to platonic relationships/so-called friendships equally as well. I think the second stanza says it all, more or less. Easier said than done, but to let go and let God is the best thing. I've not been able to do that until I've tried every thing possible within self to right either a romantic relationship or a friendship. But, sadly there does come a point of acceptance. That this is not going to work.... They are as they are...and look within myself to see what my part in it might be....unreasonable expectations, etc...if there were.... You capture broken relationships well and the pain and broken heartedness which goes with it.... Thanks, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes, you just have to coast a while, and live the lie, for someone else |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Love doesn't have that spout that you can turn off and on....though I have looked for it many of times. a very powerful write this is. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, this is a very heart-felt write. Very touching..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm always feeling these writings |
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