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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2003-01-23 03:19 PM

Sex in the Fast Lane

I watched him coming
  Sexy swagger he had
Eyes penetrating every muscle underneath
  his garments
I shivered from the heat of my thoughts

What a magnificent sense of presence
   he pushed aside the air to make way towards me
What lascivious muse did humor my
  expectation of fantasy

Driver's license he asked?
Huh! What red light, I said?

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (01-23-2003 03:42 PM).]
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-01-23 03:23 PM

Ahhh cute write with an unexpected twist at the end!
Thanks for the smiles.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-23 03:38 PM

This was cute. I liked it. I was surprised at the end, too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  
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