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Open Poetry #24

a tribute

AcousticBlue
New Member

since 2003-01-21

Posts 5
buffalo

0 posted 2003-01-23 02:02 PM

shadowed by day
as we slip through the vally
warped from the compromise
trade for our time
I feel the emptiness
rising inside of me
but I must digress
I know it's all in my mind

I am the prisim of
my own singularity
where all things converge
and then suddenly divide
I feel the emptiness
slowly encroahcing
but I must confess
you know it's all in my mind

couldnt you
and couldnt I
and couldnt we
have found out some other way
and couldnt us
and couldnt them
and couldnt they
have found out some better way
.
.
.
.
.
for seth
6-11-01

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-01-23 02:23 PM

AcousticBlue
Perhaps, enjoyed the read.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-23 02:41 PM

Yes, probably so. I enjoyed your poem, even though it was kind of sad..

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-02-01 12:18 PM

I am the prisim of
my own singularity
where all things converge
and then suddenly divide

thats a powerful metaphor, I like it.
Though its somewhat stinging sad.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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