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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-01-23 11:00 AM





The sun is high in morning sky
And not a cloud above
It's just the day to feel this way
It's a perfect time to love...

Forget the fears, forget the tears
Just set the spirit free
The past is gone, a new day dawns
There's much to do and see...

The place to start lies in the heart
We find our wishes there
Like butterflies, take wing and rise
Your dreams are meant to share...

It's time to chance with sweet romance
Beneath blue skies above
In parting note...to close, she wrote:
"It's a perfect time to love"...

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

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SEA
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1 posted 2003-01-23 11:09 AM


I haven't got to read you for a while It's so nice to get to again, this is beautiful, reads like a song.
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2 posted 2003-01-23 11:11 AM


Oh yes, Sunny...it is a "perfect time to love", isn't it........

This one's a     to me, friend....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-01-23 11:13 AM


oh thank you SEA, and you're right...I haven't been around much, as had a lot of personal irons in the fire.  But, can't stay away that long......home is where the heart is, and this is mine!  Glad you liked this and it came out like a song, so who knows? Something light and airy maybe!!! ~~S~~  

Hi garysgirl!! It sure is nice to see someone else deliriously in love, (and before Spring, too!) I wish you two the very very best, and keep me posted on how you're doing!  ~~S~~ (oh, and thank you, too!)


A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!


[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (01-23-2003 11:17 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-01-23 12:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sunnyone, I know this feeling ever so well and wish it could be a good time for me too as I lost my love on New Years! (sigh) I wish fr true happiness to always fill your heart and for bluebirds to warble in you always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-01-23 02:22 PM


Simply superb!--visually, conceptually, rhythmically, poetically...

I loved this!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-01-23 04:58 PM


Gee, Sunny, you aren't a romantic are you?   Beautiful, I loved it.  

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Sunnyone
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7 posted 2003-01-23 06:48 PM


Oh Noah, I'm so sorry to hear about your lost love, and I know that words don't make the hurting any less.  But I hope you know that time will heal your heart, and your family here will support you with love.  Thank you, Noah...

Hi Linda, and thank you so much!! It's always a pleasure to have friends comment on your work, and that is what makes this site so special.  I appreciate having you stop by and take a read!!  

Hi Michael, and how did you possibly guess...I wonder!!!!  Now I wonder who else would fit in that category...Hmmmm????  Thank you, dearest friend......it's nice to have you here!!!

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

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