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Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-22 05:09 PM

Times,
They all go by,
Faster as the sands spin the strings of song and story,
But,
Through all this logical turmoil,
I will be your everything,
A true love,
A kind romantic,
The shoulder you lean on,
A light in the darkness,
The keeper of your secrets,
Holder of your dreams,
And the one that catches,
And dries your tears in sad times,
Yet,
All through this everything,
I am still nothing,
Nothing but your everything.

Anyways, enjoy. The next few will be a bit different...

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-01-22 06:10 PM

"I will be your everything,
A true love,
A kind romantic,
The shoulder you lean on,
A light in the darkness,
The keeper of your secrets,
Holder of your dreams,
And the one that catches,
And dries your tears"

this is the whole of it here....
sweet sentiments

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-22 06:36 PM

Enjoyed.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-22 10:57 PM

(smiles) And everything about your poetry appeals to all of us poets here, sweet friend, you truly are a new breath of fresh air here and I can't wait to see you grow and mature here as you are already naturally talented, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-01-22 11:05 PM

Beautiful thoughts here!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-23 03:25 AM

nice work

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-01-23 08:38 AM

"I am nothing but your everything"... Great line, PB..

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2003-01-23 08:59 AM

Wonderful work, really enjoyed this.

Sincerely
Rick

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-01-23 09:11 AM

Poetic Bard
Well done, enjoyed.

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

9 posted 2003-01-23 04:24 PM

becoming nothing to become someone else's everything. how brave.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-01-23 04:31 PM

This is really good. When you're on here longer, you will see that I'm one of the "hopeless romantics" at PIP....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

11 posted 2003-01-23 04:35 PM

Well then, I'm glad I'm not the only romantically helpless person here. Heh. I look forward to posting the rest o' my love poems.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

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