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kram
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 20
texas

0 posted 2003-01-22 09:58 AM

They stood under a floral rainbow
once the storm had passed
through a long dark summer
and the black months
had drifted north.

The early sun awakened her
gently touching a golden shoulder.
Beads of perspiration kissed
her upper lip good morning.
The white sand was her bed, there to cushion her
in case she fell back into his bad dream
or tumbled from a wedding vow.

She filled his ring with finger
and fed him cake and promises.
They sipped champagne and drank each other’s eyes
in their own secluded jungle.

Sweat dotted his shirtfront
when the breeze blew the loose cotton
against the porous skin
which had,
with foolish pride,
tried to restrain the wonderful new life that flowed from it.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-01-22 10:03 AM

kram
Phrases of praises, enjoyed.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-22 10:26 AM

Where IS this Eden, then?
Enjoyed, kram. Thank you!

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-22 11:09 AM

Good poem.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-22 06:30 PM

romantic, and colorful, nice poem

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-01-22 08:16 PM

oooooo enjoyed every word of this.different. loved the ending lines. liked the pictures you painted in my mind. very descriptive

lots of love, gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-01-22 08:19 PM

Kram

I hope you don't mind if I just say, wonderful!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-01-22 08:32 PM

Very enjoyable and romantic.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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